thesis statement

 Slums have a negative affect human population due to dirty water ,poor education, and few job opportunities

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During the 19th century, many capital cites and port cities became manufacturing centers, and

landless peasants and other lower classes and other lower classes seeking employment were attracted

to cities. Slums are a big population of people that are low classes in there states or country that go to a

town or a city that has any operating manufacturing work or job. Slums have a negative affect human

population due to dirty water ,poor education, and few job opportunities. Dirty water can get people

from slums sick and ill then school is missed .

Water is need for life and with out it people can die. A quote from source 4 two billion slum

dwellers by Elisabeth Eaves "By 2030,estimated of 5 billion of the 8.1billion people will live in

cities ,about 2 billion well lack clean water .With only 2 billion out of 8.1 billion people getting clean

water mast mean that a lot lack clean water. With more then 6 billion people not getting good water

there is no wander that people get sick, and when sick that mean no school, which mean low smarts

people.

Poor education is never good and can stop people from getting jobs ."Slumwelers work as maids

and guards". This mean that they are low payed . That there is to many people in slums which

makes it hard to get money

With few jobs opportune which mean that people do not get jobs." near a railroad tacks workers pound

files and solder melt furniture". That lady says that people can life with 1 dollar means that they

problty get pay a dollar.

In the last century Urban areas have had grow so big that its area has been not able to do housing,

public services and the ability of city to proved jobs.Slums affect human population due to dirty water

poor education and few jobs operations.Dirty water can get any one sick and can effect some one

eduction which causes few jobs. This live would not be easy for an high class person

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During the 19th century, many capital cites and port cities became manufacturing centers, and

landless peasants and other lower classes and other lower classes seeking employment were attracted to

cities. Slums are a big population of people that are low classes in there states or country that go to a

town or a city that has any operating manfacturing work or job. Slums have a negative affect human

population due to dirty water ,poor education, and few job opportunitie.Dirty water can get people from

slums sick and ill and if you get sick then you miss school .

Water is need for life and with out it people can die. A quote from source 4 two billion slum

dwellers by Elisabeth Eaves "By 2030,estimated of 5 billion of the 8.1billion people will live in


cities ,about 2 billion well lack clean water .With only 2 billion out of 8.1 billion people getting clean

water mast mean that a lot lack clean water. With more then 6 billion people not getting good water

there is no wander that people get sick, and when sick that mean no school, which mean low smarts

people.

Poor education is never good and can stop people from getting jobs ."Slumwelers work as maids
and secuty guards". This mean that they are low payed . That there is to many people in slums which

makes it hard to get money

With few jobs opportune which mean that people do not get jobs." near a railroad tacks workers pound

files and solder meatelin furniture". That lady says that people can srive with 1 dollar means that they

prably get pay a doller.

In the last century Urban areas have had grow so big that its area has been not able to do housing,

public services and the ability of city to proved jobs.Slums affect human population due to dirty water

poor education and few jobs operations.Diry water can get any one sick and can effect some one

eduction which causes few jobs. This live would not be easy for an amarcn.

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In the lasts centurys urban areas like africa or asia have been growing so fast and so big that the contrys that hold slum have been affentin saleing houses ,publie sevices and that abliity of there town or citiy to provide any can of emploment. slums are places on are own plarnt that is so over crowded that it has billions of people in a small area  which cause small job oprtings and illness water becasue of poor educntion.

Outline

Outline Structure                                                                   Notebook page 110

World Geography

Outline due for Research Paper: Monday, October 17

Use this format for your outline:

I.         Introduction

A. During the 19th century, many capital cites and port cities became manufacturing centers, and landless peasants and other lower classes and other lower classes seeking employment were attracted to cities

B.    Slums are a big population of people that are low classes in there states or country that go to a town or a city that has any operating manfacturing work or job

C.    Slums have a negative affect human population due to dirty water ,poor education, and few job opportunities

D.     dirty water can get people from slums sick and ill and if you get sick then you miss school

II.         Defensible Point #1:

A.Water is need for life and with out it people can die

B. A quote from source 4 two billion slum dwellers by Elisabeth Eaves "By 2030,estimated of 5 billion of the 8.1billion people will live in cities ,about 2 billion well lack clean water",. 
                         

C.with only 2 billion out of 8.1 billion people getting clean water mast mean that a lot lack clean water
     

D.with more then 6 billion people not getting good water there is no wander that people get sick, and when sick that mean no school, which mean low smarts people.
    

III.         Defensible Point #2

A.Poor education is never good and can stop people from getting jobs
     

B.    "Slumwelers work as maids and secuty guards".

                                      

                                     

C. this mean that they are low payed
    

D that there is to many people in slums which makes it hard to get a job
  

IV.         Dependable Point #3

A.with few jobs opportune which mean that people do not get jobs
     

B.     " near a railroad tacks workers pound files and solder meatelin furniture"

                            

C.that lady says that people can srive with 1 dollar means that they prably get pay a dollar
     

D.
    

V.         Conclusion

A.In the last century Urban areas have had  grow so big that its area has been not able to do housing, public services aND the ability of city to proved jobs

B.  Slums affect human population due to dirty water poor education and few
jobs operations.

C.diry water can get any one sick and can effect some one eduction which causes few jobs.    

D.   this live would not be easy for an amarcn.